Crona ((child of darkness))

[Crona]

Cold;; buT i'M sTiLL heRe...

Name: Crona
Nickname: Child of darkness.
Gender: Male
Age: As a wolf, around 17, but in actual years, 1 and a half.

Pack: Loner, looking for a Pack
Duty: Since he doesn't have a Pack, Crona doesn't have a duty, but he would probably be an Omega when he joins one.

Appearance: Crona is a tall, long-limbed, scrawny young wolf. His lack of nutrition and childhood starvation has left him almost skeletal and very frail-looking. He has black and pink fur, and very light ice-blue eyes, which are normally wide with fear or surprise. The young wolf can be very timid-looking, often hiding in smaller corners or areas more difficult to get into, often with his abnormally large ears often flat against his head and his tail tucked between his legs. He slouches over a lot, making him appear shorter than usual. He normally appears to shake, and his eyes are wider than normal, usually because fear surrounds him. His pelt is black with pink streaks along his back and tail, pink paws, and pink on his head and ears. His ice-blue eyes seem to glow at times due to their lightness.In general, Crona appears to be a tall, starved stray looking for a home.

Personality: Crona is very timid and often backs down from fights or anything of the sort for fear of feeling pain. Pain and fear itself are the two things the pink-and-black wolf fears most, often hiding and isolating himself so that he might never meet these things. Crona is very gullible, believing the first things he hears if made to sound like it's the right thing. He has good intents, but the young wolf often confuses right with wrong, which gets him into trouble. He can also be loyal, following one leader with all his heart and making sure that his/her orders are fulfilled first and foremost, but at the same time, untrustworthy, likely t give secretes it they're pried out of him. He acts very nervous and jumpy, and is also delusional and schizophrenic. Random outbursts should be expected, because there is a voice inside his head he named Ragnarok.

History: As a pup, Crona grew up with his mother, Medusa. She wanted a daughter and was made that Crona turned out to be a son, so she often neglected him and made him fend for himself as a pup, often forcing him to kill smaller animals and create a hunger for warm blood inside his pitifully small and shattered heart. Most days, Crona's was left in the cave being used as a den, enclosed in what he believed to be eternal darkness, where he went crazy. This is about when Ragnarok started talking... After Medusa completely abandoned Crona, after she already verbally abused and scared him for life with derogatory names and titles, the young wolf lived the rest of his so-far short life in complete loneliness, wondering if he would survive until the next day. Many times, he had attempted to kill himself, throwing himself off shorter cliffs and flinging himself into walls of mountain sides. May cuts and bite-marks go up and down his legs and body, patches of fur missing where he has knawed at. Now, he's looking for a Pack to call home and someone to teach him right from wrong...

A b i t a b o u t y o u

OoC name: Katy
Other characters: None, so far... Maybe I'll make one later named Kanashimi, depending on how well I keep active.
How did you find us? Well, I think you all left an add on one of my sites, and a decided to check it out. It looked pretty good, and I love canine RPGs, so I decided to join and see how good it was.

[Impact*]

Ok, there are a few problems to address here, before I can accept this app. Firstly, that image is actually too large for a signature. It's fine in so far as the wings, etc, but its size is an issue. If you could resize it to no taller than 400px, then that'd be great.

Second, your appearance section is currently a little short at 90 words. We actually ask for 150, so please work on this a little.

Finally, the history. Humans do not, and never have, existed within Pursual, so the whole humans/dogs section of Crona's history needs to be rewritten please.

Other than that, looking good! :)

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[Crona]

Modified... Tell me if it's good, because, it's like, 8:00 am, so I don't know how well I did.
Sorry about the problems, though... Wasn't thinking, was I, when I made it?

[Impact*]

Ok, you've got the second two points modified, but your sig is still the same. Please edit it to no taller than 400px, and no wider than 500.

[Crona]

Signature modified. I'm sorry that it's taking me so long to catch on... I fail badly...

[Impact*]

Not a problem. Accepted as a Loner, on the condition that you have him join a pack in the near future. Welcome to Pursual, Katy :)